GTA IV #2

[Mercury]

Vector lines and some splatter brushes with a handmade outline of a city

landscape, once again featuring my baby the NRG900RR.


Edit: I took note of suggestions and applied them. Here is the outcome.

Before:


After:

[xMrFoxhoundx]

Your embarassing me. I'm still trying to finish my first sig.

[sAiiNt]

Sex. 9.9/10

[SiNAtiK45]

8.5/10

You should sharpen the render a bit.

Like the 1st version, my eyes go straight to the white splatter at the bottom middle

[Vice]

I wouldn't change anything

[SiNAtiK45]

Im like 75% through my GTA4 sig now.

Post it when im finished.

[BluePacific]

Originally Posted by SiNAtiK45

8.5/10

You should sharpen the render a bit.

Like the 1st version, my eyes go straight to the white splatter at the bottom middle

SiNAtiK said exactly what I was thinking. Those splatter brushes are too sharp. Also, try bringing the opacity down on the lines, it may look a little better.

8/10

[xMrFoxhoundx]

Originally Posted by Vice

I wouldn't change anything

This is the only comment that matters on the whole thread, haha.

[Mercury]

Fixed.

[SiNAtiK45]

I would have just sharpened up the bike a little, and turned the splatter down a tiny bit, not as much.

[Mercury]

Originally Posted by SiNAtiK45

I would have just sharpened up the bike a little, and turned the splatter down a tiny bit, not as much.

That's what I did. Refer to the first post, and compare.

[SiNAtiK45]

Oh yeah when I looked a min ago, the 1st pic didnt show..

9.5/10..